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I like this poem, but it seems a bit inconsistent to me - particularly this verse.
The old man's laugh
Tempered with time
The young ones'
But just a mime
I really like the verse, but it doesn't seem to fit with everything else you're saying about the young man... It's probably just the way I'm reading it. Maybe you're saying that the young man's laugh will grow over time? |