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When did the
music leave
I was still dancing
I believe
I did not hear
the music depart
I was dancing with
What my heart
Thought was
Love's song
How was it
Wrong
How was I
Hearing
Love's music
So endearing
Was I dancing
So alone
That I did not
Hear the tone
Of the music
Subtly change
I cannot
Rearrange
The music
That I want to hear
And the melody
I fear
Is no longer mine
Copyright © 1984-2010 Saddlesnsongs
I really like this!
Thanks Carl.
Good poem, it is pretty cleverly constructed!
Thanks Snowman! I appreciate your comment. As I wrote in " I Cannot " though; the words do just " flow as they will "
love it
Thanks evakaye!