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Fallen from the heavens Her broken wings hang loosely As she curses her maker A thought strikes She is free Free to reign her terror on the Earth We can't see her But she sees us, Whispers in our ears "She doesn't love you. He should die. They don't need the money." Taking revenge on her father, Who cast her from the heavens She's the thoughts in the unstable The lust in forbidden affairs The gun you brought to school that day The knife you carry in your pocket But she can still see them Guiding us Pushing us onto the right path And away from her But she fights Still whispering to the smallest child The one who likes to throw knives at his older sister And even to the most devoted husband She whispers She is sin, Yet still she yearns to return home So she whispers to her former companions Turning some of them to her side, Breaking their wings None can fly anymore, But that doesn't matter. She is in the greedy, The ones that don't care who they step on On their way up the ladder The mother of evil But still an angel So she whispers, Still revenging against her creator She's the voice in my head Telling me what to do Trying to sway me to her side My bad angel But she's not just mine She's yours And hers And his She's everywhere And she's here to stay No matter how hard we try.
This is a pretty good poem. Personally I would remove "The gun you brought to school that day". I don't think it's in good taste.