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A very nice poem, and a very nice story.
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i LOVE this. i gave you a Fantastic :) x
i really really love this and people reading it will be touched, it has such a sad feel to it yet a message of kindness and looking past appearances. i really love this. great great poem. its the best ive seen on here! and ive read quite a few!! :)
keep on writing!
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i really do love this. you picked a great title, as An Old Man emphasises the fact that most people will only see him as that, an OLD MAN, yet he is SO much more that that. great x
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Exelent poem one that has a real story and gives so much feeling, it does touch at the heart strings. well done
Mature gent
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Exelent poem one that has a real story and gives so much feeling, it does touch at the heart strings. well done
Mature gent
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This poem touched my heart as I read it. Bravo! You are an excellent writer.
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Heartfelt Poem, well done, you have a special gift.
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Southernpoet, being new to the forum, I've the advantage of reading works previously posted. I read some of your "old" poems. I particularly like this one. Please correct me if I'm wrong, this can only be written from experience. By the way, we haven't heard from you for some time. Please drop us a line.
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