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A good poem again! I think you should get rid of 'in the confusion'; it negates the effect you are achieving.
Just have 'I stand, lost', I think.
Perhaps you should punctuate the poem a bit more.
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Not bad at all, I quite like it.
There are some Punctuation issues, but no matter.
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yeah, im not sure of the punctuation on this one...can anyone help me out? thanks
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A very strong poem .
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