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Coma

By wild bill28 | Posted: 16 December 2008

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I am alive, but then I am dead.
I try to scream, but I make no sound.
My eyes want open,so I am lost and not found.
I hear voices ,but I think it is my thoughts in my head.
I see flashes of my life and wonder if I have already died.

I want to tell them not to give up.
I am still here, not to pull the plug.
If I could get something to move, 
then they would not have to chose.
So I try with ever thing I've got.
To move something ,oh help me God!

Nothing happen to my surprise.
Have I already crossed over, have I died?
I am so confused,and their is nothing I can do.
My mind is here, and my body is over there.
You see this is my worst fear, in a coma, not being able
to do anything, but lying there dieing stuck on a hospital bed.
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Comments 
debbie reynolds
24 December 2008
Wow, intense, true to life, I can relate to this, well done keep em' coming. Happy Christmas xxx

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