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By brian dunn | Posted: 02 September 2011

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Right now jacks in trouble in is boat with is dead friend,and is other mate fred and two mermaids he has lost all is money from the fish is friend lays dead down in one of the bunkbeds.

Freds not talking to jack and wants jack to dump this two women (mermaids) back on the rocks where they came fromand take john home and for jack to hand himself in for murder.

But then linda tells jack that she knows of a place where they can bring back john from the dead, but of course it is a very dangerous place but jack will do anything to have is friend back so they set off for the island where they enter the forest of fear a few battles later they get john back to life and jack tells linda how much he loves her and on there journey they find a gem worth thousands of pounds.

So jack decides to go with linda back to mermaid city, so jack give the boat to fred and john along with the gem and sends them home.  jack and the two mermaids head for mermaid city but there way is blocked by two massive rocks because lindas father will not accept  a human in to marmaid city the father thinks he can not be in love with her so jack to prove is love asks for a quest inwhich to prove himself the father sends jack to a mountain on another island and tells him he must make a leap of faith from the top of the highest cliff so is final battle 90 %TP5 is with is love for linda and death but then remembered what linda had said ''love will find a way.'' so they both jump.

On seening this her father floods the island and they both land back in the sea the father opens the rocks and excepts jack into the mermaid city. where they live happy every after, or not . then abit about how he lives in is new found life this being the aftermath.50,000 or more words later

The end.

The theme here is love conquer all the getting over love finding love again, the love of is friends, the love between two people.

 

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