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Poem about love, one of the first I ever wrote

By Elisha | Posted: 18 December 2008

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When It Rains.

To kiss you in the rain
out in the open
Showing you how I love
So unashamed
Wet mouth
Sweetly opening my lips further
Chills not from the rain
Your warm breath, wonderfully draining.
To kiss you in the rain.
Cold air repelled by your arms around me
As you kiss me in the rain.
Love so deep, 
No need to be dry
As we kiss in the rain.
Truly twin flames
Our souls truly elemental 
Love grows warmer
Rain is our fuel
Kissing in the rain
we stop only when the rain ends
I think of you more and more
Day to Day, divided by sunlight
The Torrent we shared
Kissing in the rain
We have to wait
For the next time it rains
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Comments 
Carl
18 December 2008
 
Presuming that I've read it correctly [:P] I really like the way that the two 'lovers' come together only when it rains, which makes them not quite people in a way -- more elemental (as you say) or like disembodied [watery] souls. There is a lot of physicality to them too.

The line I stumbled over was 'Torrent we share'. Divided by sunlight, [in] torrents we share - maybe?

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