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A Poem about God's special touch

By Elisha | Posted: 18 December 2008

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Symphony

Little drops of rain
Large ripples do they create
As fingertips then do touch
A gentle sound to hear
Listen to the ripples' melody
Get bigger
As the Hands of God continue to play
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Carl
18 December 2008
 
I really like the idea behind this poem - and the poem itself. I stumbled over 'do they create' but it is difficult to see how you could improve that.

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