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A Lost Thought

By evakaye | Posted: 06 October 2011

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Alcohol
Alcohol
Drugs
Drugs

I think that in my infinite wisdom,

I was thinking about God.

But I did not truly truly care;

I did not trust that he was there:

I was just too drunk, you see, and that yellow pill I took

shook all the sense I had in me, from my little little  head

and then I just went to my bed

and fell into a deep deep sleep.

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Comments 
JD Higginson
07 October 2011
Eva,

I liked the first half of this but I think the second half could use some work to bring it up to par with your other work.

JD

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