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Butterflies poem

By Lovepink | Posted: 26 August 2008

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See the butterfly up in the sky.
Watch it as it flutters by!

Butterflies start as tiny eggs.
Out come caterpillars with many legs.
Little caterpillars growing long,
crawling,
feeding,
getting strong.

They love to nibble and to chew.
They eat small leaves
and big ones, too.

Four weeks pass.  They grow more.
They shed their skin.
One time, two times, three times, four.
Once again a change comes around.
Now it is hanging upside down.
Soon, it spins a silky pad
to hold on tight,                  
and a halter, too,
to keep it upright.

Now it sheds its skin
one time more,
to reveal a chrysalis,
not at all like the skin before.
Inside this shell it is changing,
growing.
Eyes, legs, wings,

are now almost showing.
What can it be?
Wait and see.
It's a butterfly!
 

Its wings are wet.
It has to rest.

It can't fly yet.
Soon, it tries hard with all its might,
spreads its four wings--

and takes a flight.
Like a flower in the sky,
what a sight --
a butterfly!
Wings of black, orange,
yellow, and blue,
red, green, gold,
and purple, too.
Colours bright as in a rainbow.

What makes these colours?
Do you know?
It's layers of little scales that we see.
They make the colours as bright as can be!
Butterflies drink nectar from 
pretty flowers.
It tastes so sweet, they sip for hours.
They use their long, thin tongues
to drink.
That's kind of odd, don't you think?
From caterpillar to butterfly
takes eight weeks in all.
All sizes of butterflies--
big and small.
See the butterfly up in the sky.
Watch it as it flutters by! 
 
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Comments 
brownsugar6
28 August 2008
I enjoyed this poem. It does a goood job explaining the cycle of the butterfly. It's a little long, but enjoyable.


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blackrose
28 August 2008
This is a brilliant poem, I could really picture the whole proce

This is the kinda thing that is perfect for children, have you ever considered turning it into a childrens story? I have worked with children and books with rhythm and rhyme really seemed to capture their attention and feed their imaginations!

I would definately buy something like this to read to my children!!!

x..
Fredaa
29 August 2008
I loved it. It definitely talks to children. I agree it is a bit long for children, but at the same time it speaks to them. Way to go. I'd buy your work for my grandson. Good job.
Carl
31 August 2008
I really enjoyed this poem! It's the kind of poem, I would have have enjoyed reading to my daughter when she was small.

Please post some more!
debbie reynolds
20 May 2009
This speaks to me as no doubt it would to children, of all ages!

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