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Limmerick Number Two

By XxFrankiexX | Posted: 01 January 2009

Views: 427
There once was a father of three,
Whose wife got stuck up a tree,
She screamed "Don't touch this bough, I don't want to come down,
and have to cook all of your tea"!
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Comments 
Girlie
07 January 2009
This is fun - I like it!
Squelch
14 January 2009
Lol. Funny, and at the same time it's short and simple. I like it :)
unbridledspirit
24 January 2009
I liked it except for the last sentence.  That is because I didn't understand the concept of "cook all of your tea".  Tea isn't cooked.  Therefore, it looked like you were just trying to find a word that rhymed (tea) with three and tree without making sure the use of the word was correct (cooking tea).  Maybe if you had said "and have to boil or make all of your tea" that would have been more applicable.  However, I think you were on the right track and it did flow well.
Mr Richard
24 January 2009
I think it's a great Limmerick.As for the concept of cooking tea .In Scotland 'tea' can refer to the third meal in the day .We can say breakfast , dinner , tea.
So it makes perfect sense to me. In fact I'm off to cook my tea right now ! Keep up the good work.
debbie reynolds
25 January 2009
Crazy short and sweet limmerick,keep them coming!
Shakespril
22 March 2010
Funny!

IT made me reminisce my own father...he was a dictator but with a heart...I can not imagine him in that tree...Well! my mom would never be in that tree, she is too big to be there...

LOL

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