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unfinished poem

By evakaye | Posted: 07 February 2012

Views: 194

A cue

men laugh loudly

as do you

He's eating red jelly,

this old man with white hair

and well-shod feet casually living on an office desk

And then they are talking of millions of pounds

being ridiculous and obscure

fucking take, take, take.

Even their giving is taking, obscured.

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Comments 
Carl
11 February 2012

Especially love the last line

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