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Izzywhizzy,
I really like the idea of a jagged sheild for bark, and a fig tree being lonely. Keep up the good work!
Anonymous :)
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Thank you! i'm so glad you like it!
Izzywhizzy
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i think the last verse was the best!
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It might not be good, because i'm only 9! please vote!
izzywhizzy
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Great job!
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thanks so much kreeves106!!!
-Izzywhizzy
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I think this poetry is of a very high standard . I hope you will always find time to write because if this is how good you are at only nine then what a treat we are all in for as your writing develops. Well done . Should the second line be That hung very proudly, like a bat on a tree?
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yes. Thank you for comennting!!
izzywhizzy
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You are talented! Keep writing!
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It's hard to believe that you are only 9. You have mature writing skills.
In other words, you are a great writer!
taylorswift97
PS. Please come comment on my aritcles!
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Thanks, I am ten now though!
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Nice description.
Audrey
(Oh yeah...come see my stuff too :) )
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