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The lonley fig tree

By Izzywhizzy | Posted: 01 January 2009

Views: 484
The fig tree was decorated from bottom to top with globes,
That hung very proudly, like a bat on tree,
Like washing on a line,
Like wings on a bee.

The leaves of the tree were as green as a bunch of unripe, fresh berries,
and as rough as an elephants skin,
as strong as a hard brick wall,
and as detailed as a fishes fin.

It had a jagged shield,
it was coffee brown and it enclosed,
the whole of the tree completely, it looked like a abandoned shop, but it was always strangely closed,.

the tree itself was deserted, standing very tall,
at the edge of our garden,
waiting for a time,
when a friend would call.
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Comments 
Anonymous
03 January 2009
Izzywhizzy,

I really like the idea of a jagged sheild for bark, and a fig tree being lonely. Keep up the good work!

Anonymous :)
Izzywhizzy
03 January 2009
Thank you! i'm so glad you like it!

Izzywhizzy
Anonymous
03 January 2009
i think the last verse was the best!
Izzywhizzy
04 January 2009
It might not be good, because i'm only 9! please vote!

izzywhizzy
kreeves106
16 January 2009
Great job!
Izzywhizzy
17 January 2009
thanks so much kreeves106!!!

-Izzywhizzy
Mr Richard
02 February 2009
I think this poetry is of a very high standard . I hope you will always find time to write because if this is how good you are at only nine then what a treat we are all in for as your writing develops. Well done . Should the second line be That hung very proudly, like a bat on a tree?
Izzywhizzy
07 February 2009
yes. Thank you for comennting!!
izzywhizzy
unbridledspirit
07 February 2009
You are talented!  Keep writing!
taylorswift97
10 January 2010
It's hard to believe that you are only 9. You have mature writing skills. 
In other words, you are a great writer! 

taylorswift97

PS. Please come comment on my aritcles!
Izzywhizzy
12 February 2010
Thanks, I am ten now though!
audreyhepburn
13 February 2010
Nice description.
Audrey

(Oh yeah...come see my stuff too :) )

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