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The mountain's face was purple with rage And his hair as sharp as teeth, I think he'd lost his fingers In a battle with a thief. He stared at me with unwanting eyes, I found myself looking back, I turned around to let him be, And strode away into the black. But there was something about the mountain, That was quiet and very still, He was like a solitary soldier, Writing this poem by ink and quill.
Awesome, I really liked your use of personification here.