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Whispers of the Heart

By kreeves106 | Posted: 10 January 2009

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Rennie drummed her fingers on the desk, considering her options. There were none. She picked up the phone, held it in her hand for a few seconds then dropped it back on the cradle. "Coward," she berated herself. Making the call would undoubtedly subject her to the usual ridicule and jeering remarks, maybe even the open hostility she'd often experienced in the past. But that wasn't the worst of it. It was what happened afterwards when she had to meet with the detective face to face and the guarded look she was given, the one that said you're either a freak or you're mad as a hatter. Sometimes, she wondered herself if it wasn't true.
She drew in a deep breath then let it out slowly. It didn't matter what they thought, because not making the call meant a young girl would die. She didn't know exactly when it would happen, but there was a sense of urgency that told her it would be soon, possibly even tonight. Normally, the impressions were too vague, too out of focus for her to even consider calling the police, but this one was different. This one shook her to the core. She'd started picking up the girl's fear early this morning and it had escalated throughout the day until Rennie couldn't ignore it any longer. She had to do something. Even if they didn't listen to her, at least she'd know she tried.
Setting her chin determinedly, she picked up the phone and dialed the police department. "I need to speak to someone in Homicide." 
"Is this an emergency?"
"Yes.no, I mean, it could be."
"Ma'am, are you reporting a homicide?"
Rennie's shoulders slumped. Here we go, she thought. "No, it hasn't happened yet." 
"I'm sorry, Ma'am, did you say it hasn't happened yet?"
She wanted to scream at the woman to just let her talk to a homicide detective, but past experience had taught her that losing her temper would get her nowhere. "I believe I have information on a murder that's about to take place. Please, I just need to speak to someone in Homicide."
An impatient sigh. "Is this an ongoing investigation?"
Rennie gritted her teeth. Of course not, you stupid woman, I just said it hadn't happened yet. Out loud she said, "Yes, it is."
"I see, now it makes sense. Which detective did you need to speak to?"
"I.I don't remember his name. Perhaps if you told me who's on duty right now, it will ring a bell."
Another impatient sigh. "Michael Arnold, Ryan Stone, Vince Tyler, Mac Logan. Shall I go on Ma'am?"
"No, it's.the last one."
"Mac Logan?"
"Yes, that's him."
"Just one minute, Ma'am, and I'll connect you."
Rennie clutched the phone to her ear, praying Detective Logan had an open mind. Her stomach was in knots, she was shaking like a leaf, and a cold sweat had broken out on her forehead. If she'd gone in personally, he probably would have had her carted off and tested for drug use. As it was, she'd be lucky if he didn't send some nice men in white coats to her house to escort her to the nearest mental institution.
"Mac Logan," a man's deep voice sounded in her ear.
"Detective Logan, my name is.well, that's not important. I'm calling because I want to report a homicide that's going to take place."
"Going to take place?"
"Yes. A young girl has been kidnapped and."
"Has a ransom been demanded?"
"No," Rennie said hastily, "I mean, I don't think so. Listen," she tried to steady her voice. "The man who took her is going to kill her and I think it's going to happen tonight."
There was a short pause before he spoke again. "Maybe we should start at the beginning. Did you witness the kidnapping?"
"No, I just know it happened. He's going to kill her. He's just waiting for night to fall and." Fear. My God, the gut wrenching fear that girl was going through.
"Miss, are you still there?"
"She's scared," Rennie said in a hoarse whisper. "You have to help her."
"Do you know where she's being held?"
"No, but I might be able to find her if.if I concentrated hard enough or had something that belonged to her." She squeezed her eyes shut, bracing herself for the awkward conversation she knew was coming.
"Let me get this straight. You didn't see the kidnapping, but you know it took place, and you think you can locate her if you touched something of hers."
"Yes," she said feebly, "that about sums it up."
"I don't suppose you know the girl's name?"
She could hear the doubt in his voice but at least he was still listening. "Give me a minute." Rennie opened her mind, let the emotions of the girl in.
Mac Logan sat at his desk wondering what the hell he'd done to deserve getting this nut case today. He was tired and hungry and was only minutes away from leaving when he'd taken the call. Still, there was something in her voice that made him believe the woman was genuinely spooked about something whether it was real or imaginary and he felt compelled to at least listen to what she had to say. He waited for several minutes, his impatience with mounting the longer she remained silent. Finally she spoke again.
"I'm not sure." Rennie started. "It doesn't make sense. I keep seeing an angel and a star."
"I'm sure you do," Mac said caustically. "Listen, Miss, I'd love to sit here while you figure out what your visions mean but I've had a very long day and would like to get home. Not to mention, if the murder hasn't even taken place, it's not my department."
Rennie's chest tightened. She didn't understand why it wasn't coming to her when she felt so connected to the girl emotionally. "I know you think I'm crazy, but I'm telling you a murder is going to take place and soon. Maybe it's Angela. Sometimes I can only get the sound of it." Angel. She tried to clear her mind, to siphon out the horrific sensation of impending death and grab onto the girl's name, but it remained elusive.
"Why don't you think on it for awhile and if you come up with something, you can call back and talk to one of the other detectives."
Frustrated and drained from the effort to fix on the girl's name, Rennie snapped. "Listen, detective, I don't give a rat's ass if you think I'm crazy or not. I'm telling you this girl has been kidnapped and she's not going to live through the night unless you do something about it. Just check on it. Take five minutes and see if anyone with a name sounding like Angela has been reported missing, that's all I'm asking."
"Fine," Mac sighed. "I'll check it out. Give me your name and number and I'll call you back."
"I'd rather just hold."
"Suit yourself, lady."
Mac put the crazy woman on hold then got up and walked down the hall to Missing Persons. "Hey Janice, have you received a missing persons report on a young woman named Angela within the past week or so?"
"Angela? You have a last name?"
"Sorry, that's all I got."
Janice Yates, the lead Missing Persons investigator, turned to her computer and scrolled through the list of names. "No Angela."
"Any names that sound like Angela?"
She shook her head. "Alaina is the closest, but she's forty-two."
"Thanks," Mac said, irritated even more now that he knew there was nothing to the woman's claim. He strode back to his office and snatched up the phone. "No one named Angela or anything remotely sounding like it. Are you satisfied now?"
Tears welled up in Rennie's eyes. She'd been so sure he'd come back and confirm the girl had been reported missing. "Maybe no one knows she's missing yet," she suggested.
Mac tried not to sound too brusque but his patience was wearing very thin at the moment. "If no one knows she's missing then there's not much I can do to find her, is there?"
"No, I suppose not," she said, unable to disguise the deep disappointment. "I'll call back tomorrow. Maybe by then you'll have heard something."
"You do that," Mac told her then promptly hung up.
He finished stuffing the active files in his briefcase, locked up his office then headed out. He swung by his partner's office to let him know he was leaving and got caught up discussing one of the cases for another twenty minutes before he told Ryan about the woman who'd called. But Ryan hadn't laughed, as he'd expected him to. Instead he'd asked why Mac didn't believe it was possible some people were capable of psychic abilities.
"I think it's possible some people are very good at reading emotions and use that talent for their own gain by claiming to be psychic, but I don't believe anyone can predict the future or see things that have happened in the past."
"What do you call it when you have a hunch about something, a gut feeling that you can't explain? Don't you think that's psychic ability on some level?"
Mac snorted. "Hell no, it's just plain intuition and years of experience on the job. Don't tell me you believe this nut case might actually know something about a real abduction?"
Ryan shrugged. "Let's just say I wouldn't rule it out."
"Well, I'm ruling it out.  See you tomorrow."
Mac left Ryan's office, quickly dismissing the idea there was anything to what the woman had told him. He was a realist and dealt with life that way, refusing to believe in anything that couldn't be proved. He was sure the woman believed in what she was telling him. That was quite evident by the passion with which she'd spoken, but it still didn't make it a fact. He was just getting into the elevator when Janice called out for him to hold up. 
"You're not going to believe this," she said breathlessly. Janice held out the paper she had in her hand. "This just came in."
Mac took the paper and scanned it, his brows furrowing. A young college student had just been reported missing. Her parents stated they thought she'd disappeared sometime the night before because the last time anyone had seen her was around ten o'clock when she'd left the library. Her name was Angel Starr.

                       ***
Rennie got up to make a pot of coffee. Not that she needed anything that would add to her jittery nerves but she was wearing out and didn't want to fall asleep. If she slept, she might dream, and she had no intention of putting herself in a position where she couldn't shut it off. As it was, she'd already done her level best to remain detached from this girl and felt guilty for doing so. She'd have a cup of coffee, pull herself together, then try to focus on something more tangible the police could use to find her. 
Six o'clock, Rennie noted. There was still three hours until sunset. She took her cup of coffee and brought it back to the living room then settled herself on the sofa. She thought briefly about Detective Logan and couldn't really blame him for thinking she was off her rocker. It was foolish of her to have called without trying to hone in on the girl's location first or at least coming up with a name. What did a star and an angel have to do with it anyway? Heavenly bodies maybe. Was it possible she was wrong and what she'd seen was just some kind of symbolism that the girl was already dead?
Rennie shook her head. She couldn't believe that, not when she was still sensing this overwhelming fear and despair. If the girl was dead, there would be nothing but the sad emptiness that always followed when she knew it was too late. She drained the last of her coffee and set her cup on the table then leaned back and closed her eyes. Angel.
It was dark and cold. The rope was so tight on her wrists it had rubbed her skin raw and every movement brought pain. It didn't matter. He was coming back soon and this time he'd do much worse than just rape her. Her heart pounded in her chest. A frightened rabbit waiting for the big bad wolf to return and devour her. Daddy please, come find me. How many times had her father warned her about walking on campus alone at night? But she'd trusted him, this man who now held her captive, and never would have believed he could hurt her the way he had.
"Talk to me," Rennie whispered. "Tell me where you are, who you are. Give me something."
Oh God, he'd come back. No, no, not the man. Had someone found her? Her mind went blank for a moment. Where am I? I don't know, I don't know. Think. On the campus somewhere. It had to be, because he hadn't taken her far. One of the dorms? No, someone would have spotted him carrying her in. How many others had there been? Had they gone with him willingly as she'd done only to find themselves bound and gagged in some cold, dark place, scared out of their minds? God, she'd been so stupid to trust him but she'd been flattered by his obvious attraction to her, had even toyed with the idea of letting him seduce her into his bed. She'd been stupid, so stupid.
Renne's head snapped up at the loud, incessant rapping on her door. Her limbs felt heavy when she rose and she moved sluggishly to the foyer to see who was knocking so impatiently. She leaned into the door, peering out the peek hole. Good Lord, she thought, staring at the massive chest before her, the man had to be at least six foot four if she couldn't even see his face. She nearly jumped out of her skin when he rapped again, or rather pounded on the door. It came to her in a flash; it was the detective she'd spoken to earlier.
Rennie drew back the deadbolt then flipped the lock on the door handle and opened it to greet her visitor. "Someone finally reported her missing?"
Mac was pleasantly surprised by Rennie O'Neal's appearance. She was tall and slender with hair the color of corn silk, but it was such a contrast to the gypsy image he'd pictured, for a moment he just stared at her. "I think we need to talk," he finally said when she looked up at him expectantly.
Rennie stepped back to let Detective Logan in. His voice matched his looks, she thought, because both were wholly male. He was a big man, as she'd known before she'd even opened the door, and he would have been quite an imposing figure if she hadn't sensed the kindness that lay beneath the tough exterior. He had jet black hair and eyes that reminded her of the jade statue on her bookshelf and he would have been quite handsome if it wasn't for the austere expression he wore. She wondered why he'd come to question her about the girl when he obviously had serious misgivings about her. She closed the door then led him to the living room and waited until they were seated on the sofa to speak.
"How can I help you Lieutenant?"
"I believe you know something about the girl's abduction and I can understand why you're scared, but if you saw who did this, Miss O'Neal, I need to have a name so I can find her before it's too late."
"She doesn't know his name, but he's not a complete stranger. She thinks she's still somewhere on the campus but he blindfolded her so she's not sure. He's left her in the dark somewhere so she can't even look around and try to recognize where she's at but it's cold so it's probably a basement."
"In a basement near the campus," Mac repeated dryly. "That doesn't give me much to go on. You said she knows him."
"Yes, but not very well. She trusted him though, because she'd seen him around campus and was flattered by his attention." Rennie's eyes met his. There it was; that look of total disbelief in her psychic abilities accompanied by the idea she was somehow involved in the girl's abduction. "Look, Detective, I don't expect you to believe I can psychically pick up on this girl without even knowing her, but you must believe I might be able to help find her or you wouldn't be here."
"Angel Starr," he said.
"What?"
"Angel Starr, that's her name. You're right, I don't believe in this mystical power you claim to have, but the girl is missing and if you can help locate her then I don't care if you find the answer in the bottom of a tea cup."
Rennie couldn't help smiling. "I don't read tea leaves, Detective, but if you can get your hands on something that belongs to Angel, then I might be able to find her. It'll be dark soon so the faster we do this, the better chance we have of getting to her before he does something."
Mac wasn't sure what to make of Rennie O'Neal, but she certainly didn't seem to have any screws loose as he'd first believed. "I'll take you with me to talk to her parents and ask to see her bedroom. I can tell them you're working with me, although letting them know exactly in what capacity we're working together probably wouldn't be such a good idea."
She stood up. "You're wrong, Detective Logan. When a child is missing, a parent will grab at any chance to bring them home safely, no matter how remote or far-fetched." Parents, she'd discovered, were the only ones who didn't look at her like she was a freak.
                             *** 
Rennie waited until Detective Logan closed the bedroom door and they were alone to look around. Make-up scattered across a vanity, bed piled high with throw pillows, pictures of Angel and her girlfriends pasted to the vanity mirror. A dull ache settled in her heart at how happy and safe the girl always felt here. She moved her eyes around the room, shifting from object to object until she spotted an old stuffed teddy bear propped up on the window sill. Half its fur was missing and one button eye was dangerously close to falling off, but Angel had a soft spot for it and hadn't been able to part with it. 
She walked to the window and picked it up. "Her father gave this to her," she said quietly. "She's been crying for him, praying that he'll find her before the man comes back." She drew in a shuddering breath. "Angel knows he's going to kill her."
Mac watched her face, his own heart squeezing in his chest at the very real pain she was experiencing. That wasn't to say he believed in her psychic ability exactly, but he didn't think she was involved with Angel's disappearance. Rennie closed her eyes, hugging the bear to her chest. Her breathing became rough, erratic, and she started to tremble violently. Good God, what was going on inside that pretty head of hers? 
"He talked her into going for a walk with him," Rennie said. "She liked him and went willingly, but when they cut down a dark path he grabbed her and dragged her into the woods. She was so scared but she kept trying to convince herself that he'd only rape her then let her go." Tears slid down the sides of her cheeks. "Only rape her? My God," she choked, "she's so young, too young to have to endure something like that." She wiped away the tears and tried to steady herself. Crying wouldn't help.
"Miss O'Neal, where is she?"
His deep voice calmed her. Her fingers stroked the tattered bear. "He punched her in the jaw and thought she was unconscious but she was just kind of dazed by it. She.she dropped her books in the trees and he left them there but he took her purse with them. They walked downhill then veered off to the right but he stayed off the path and it was so dark she had trouble figuring out where they were." Rennie hugged the bear to her. "Angel tried to struggle, tried to get away, so he hit her again then tore off her shirt and wound it around her head. He tied her hands too, but she doesn't know what with."
Mac moved closer to her. "Miss O'Neal, where did he take her?"
She shook her head. "I don't know. I can't see it if she didn't see it. Maybe.maybe if we could locate where she dropped her books."
"Let's go," Mac said, suddenly feeling the urgency himself. If she was right, they had less than ninety minutes to find Angel.
Rennie set the bear back on the window sill. "I need something else of hers that I can take with me. If we take the bear." her voice trailed off but Mac nodded his understanding. If they took the bear, her parents would surely question it and they didn't have time to explain. She walked around the room, picking up random items before zeroing in on a gold cross. Angel wore it often and it was almost as precious to her as the bear was. She slipped it in her pocket and headed for the door, then stopped abruptly when a wave of nausea rolled through her.
He caught her just as her knees buckled. "You're white as a ghost," he said, keeping a firm grip around her waist. "Do you need to sit down for a few minutes?"
"No, he's back. She can hear him walking around above her. Just help me to the car, I'll be fine."
They left hurriedly, stopping just long enough to tell Angel's parents they'd call as soon as they knew anything. Mac helped her to the car then took the driver's seat and made the short drive to the college campus where Angel had last been seen. Even as his mind fought to make some logical sense of what was happening, he was beginning to believe Rennie really did possess some mystical power. More astonishing than that, he could almost feel the electrically charged air around her, as if she was surrounded by a soft, invisible current. She didn't speak on the way there and he didn't push her. The poor thing looked like she'd shatter into a million pieces if she had to expend even one more ounce of energy.
"There," Rennie suddenly perked up when they pulled onto the campus. 
She pointed towards the college library and barely waited long enough for him to come to a complete stop before scrambling out of the car. Clutching the cross in her hand, she stumbled across the parking lot, glancing up gratefully when Detective Logan again supported her by putting his arm around her waist. She stopped about fifty yards from the library doors then looked around for only a moment before taking a path that wound through a wooded area.
"Here," she said hoarsely, leading him off the path and into the woods. A sob escaped her lips when they spotted the scattered books not ten feet into the tree line.
"My God, you did it," he said with sincere admiration. He left her to inspect the area, being careful not to disturb anything. It was obvious there had been a scuffle here and one of the notebooks had Angel's name neatly printed on the cover. He returned to Rennie who was trembling even worse than she had back at Angel's house. "Miss O'Neal," he said gently, "which way did he take her?"
She nodded off to the right. Together, they made their way downhill through the woods and wound up in a small clearing. She led him to the right for several minutes then stopped. "This is where he tied her hands and covered her face," she said shakily. "I don't." Angel's cry echoed in her ears. Daddy, where are you? Rennie looked up at the detective helplessly. "We have to hurry; he's not going to wait until dark."
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Comments 
travelmaster
11 January 2009
Very enjoyable I look forward to the next installment. Hope I don't have too long to wait.
blackrose
12 January 2009
More please! that was fantastic..!!!

xxx
kreeves106
12 January 2009
Wow - thanks for the encouraging words - hope you're ready for Chapter Two!

Chapter Two

"You'll have to carry me," she told him.
"What?"
"She couldn't see where they were going, but she could tell when he turned in a different direction and when he got to the bottom of the hill by the way his body moved. We have to simulate it exactly the way it happened."
Without hesitation, he leaned down and lifted her easily in his arms. "What is he doing to her?"
"Playing with her," she said, her voice catching in her throat. She tightened her hold on Mac, drawing from his strength. "He's touching her, telling her what he's going to do to her."
Mac's lips drew into a tight line, determination setting in his face. "Now what?"
Rennie closed her eyes and rested her head on his chest. "Turn slowly. I'll tell you when to stop." He did as she asked and when she was sure he was aimed in the right direction, she told him to start walking. When they reached the bottom of the hill, she told him to angle to the left and continue for just a few minutes. "Stop. He put her down right here."
"I'll be damned," Mac said in a hushed tone.
Rennie opened her eyes and followed his line of sight. Nestled in the woods was a generator shed. It was run down and probably not used any longer, but there was a light on inside. 
He lowered her to the ground and drew out his weapon. "Wait here. If I don't come out in ten minutes, find your way back to the campus and call for back up."
She watched him slip through the trees, making his way silently towards the cabin. The girl's terror surrounded her, sank into her skin until it became her own. Her heart thumped wildly in her chest, keeping tempo with Angel's frightened heart. She struggled to breath, felt his hand slip beneath her skirt. No, Rennie told herself, this wasn't happening to her, it was happening to Angel. Shivering, she fought to hold back the bile that rose in her throat when his hand found the tender spot between her thighs.Angel's thighs.and began his mercilous assault.
Rennie dropped to her knees. She had to separate herself from Angel somehow. Oh God, she was too close, too connected and it hurt, it hurt. She collapsed on the ground, writhing around, struggling against an invisible attacker, wanting to fight him, but how could she when he wasn't really there. Pull your mind back, she ordered herself, break the bond. Air hissed from her lungs when he plunged into her. Her body went rigid; the violence of what he was doing shattering the thin grasp she had on her own mind. Then abruptly, the assault ended. But not the pain. The pain lingered, fueled by an incredible fear that grew increasingly stronger until it consumed her and there was nothing but a blissful darkness that took hold and made it all go away.
***
"It's okay, honey, I've got you." 
Rennie woke to a pair of intense green eyes and a face lined with concern. "What happened?"
Mac cradled her closer to his chest. "I'm not sure. I came back and found you passed out on the ground. How do you feel?"
Her eyes pooled with tears. "He was attacking us and I.I couldn't fight him off because Angel couldn't, and then it just stopped and I didn't know if it was because she took her mind away or he'd killed her."
Mac smiled softly. "She's alive, Miss O'Neal. She's alive because of you. I never would have found her in time."
Rennie felt the tension begin to ebb. She looked around, for the first time noticing the place was crawling with policemen. "What about him?"
His face hardened. "I could have killed him when I saw what he was doing to that poor girl. I shot him, but unfortunately, he's going to live."
"Angel?"
"They've taken her to the hospital. She'll have to deal with what happened to her, but she's alive, and her parents will be there to help her through it. I've already talked to the police so there's no need for me to hang around here any longer. What do you say I take you home?"
Rennie put her head back on his shoulder. She didn't even try to pretend she would be able to walk under her own steam. "That sounds nice," she yawned. "I think after this, I'll sleep for a solid week."
Mac smiled down at her. "After this, you deserve it." 
She closed her eyes, quite enjoying the feel of his strong arms around her. She liked the way he smelled too. It was clean and soapy, mixed with a musky, masculine scent that made her want to inhale deeper. His stride was long, purposeful, but she hardly felt his movements at all. He walked with the grace of a cat, smooth and sleek, and she was quickly being lulled to sleep. By the time they reached his car, she was barely able to open her eyes long enough to crawl into the passenger seat. Less than two minutes later, she was out cold.
***
Mac pulled up to Rennie's house and cut the engine. She'd drifted off shortly after leaving the college parking lot and hadn't stirred since. He thought of waking her up but she'd been weak as a kitten after she'd regained consciousness and he doubted she was in any better condition now. Her purse lay on the seat beside her so he dug through it and found her keys then got out and went around to the passenger side. Lifting her out gently m Mac carried her up to the house, fiddling with the keys for a minute before finding the right one.
She'd left a light on in the living room so that's where he took her, settling her on the sofa and dropping her purse on the coffee table. She looked so fragile, so worn. He couldn't even begin to understand what she'd gone through this evening but somehow she'd been down there in dark with Angel, suffering the same brutal attack. She had to have known that's what was going to happen, yet she'd braved it anyway. What if he'd been too late? What if that monster had managed to kill Angel? Would Rennie have felt it, experienced those last dying moments?
He stayed with her for a few more minutes, watching her sleep and contemplating the kind of life she must have. Then he went in search of her bedroom. He doubted she'd wake up for several hours and didn't want to leave her on the sofa. After checking the rooms on the first level, he climbed the stairs and located it just down the hallway to the right. He flipped on the light, glancing around appreciatively. It was simple and tastefully decorated, but not all feminine and frilly as he would have suspected. Mac pulled back the bedcovers then returned to the living room and scooped her up in his arms.
Rennie opened her eyes sluggishly, gave him a weak smile then let her head fall back on his shoulder. "You smell nice," she mumbled.
Mac chuckled. He hadn't been immune to her soft, sweet scent either. "I'm going to tuck you into bed. If you don't mind, I'd like to call you tomorrow and see how you're holding up."
"I don't mind," she murmured. She wished she wasn't so tired so she could ask him more questions about what happened but felt as if she'd been drugged.
Mac carried Rennie to her room and lowered her onto the bed. Her eyes were open, but just barely, as he took her shoes off and pulled the covers up to her waist. "It was really phenomenal what you did today. You saved that girl's life."
"No," she said softly, "we saved her. I know you didn't believe me, but you went with me anyway. Thank you for that."
"I've got to tell you, I was totally convinced you were crazy as a loon until I found out Angel Starr had popped up on a Missing Person's report."
"Don't worry about it, Detective, I'm used to it."
His chest squeezed at the sad look that crossed her face. He sat down on the edge of the bed and reached out to brush a stray curl from her forehead. "It's got to be rough having people doubt you all the time."
"Oh, I can deal with that, it's only natural. It's the way they look at me that just.hurts. At first they look at me like I'm crazy or some sort of freak, then it's like they're scared of me." Rennie smiled sadly. "I think they're afraid I can read their minds or that I know some deep, dark secret they're keeping."
"Can you?"
Her heart melted at the rakish grin on his face. "You're teasing me, Detective."
"Call me Mac. And I was only half teasing."
"No, I can't read minds, and technically I can't tell the future either."
"Technically? Now that's a statement that needs to be elaborated on, but right now you're tired and need to get some rest."
"It's been nice working with you, Mac."
He stood up. "Can I call you tomorrow?"
"If you'd like, but there's really nothing more I can tell you about what happened to Angel."
He shook his head, a smile tugging at his lips. "Some psychic you are. I was thinking more along the lines of calling to discuss a dinner date."
Rennie's stomach fluttered. "I.sure.yes," she stammered.
"Good night Miss O'Neal."
"Rennie," she corrected.
"Good night, Rennie."
She watched him walk away, feeling a little giddy. A date. Good Lord, how long had it been since she'd been out on a date? Forever, it seemed. The thought of spending time alone with Mac Logan sent her heart racing. She reached out and snapped off the lamp then curled up on her side. In spite of all the horrible things that had happened that night, she couldn't keep from smiling as she drifted off to sleep.
***
Ryan Stone leaned back in his chair with an I told you so grin on his face. "So O'Neal is the real thing. What made you go out and see her anyway instead of passing it off to Missing Persons?"
Mac ignored his partner's smug expression. "I'm not sure. I guess I just got rattled when Janice handed me the sheet on Angel Starr and I wanted to see for myself what Rennie could do to find her."
Ryan arched a brow. "Rennie?"
This time it was Mac's turn to grin smugly. "You should have volunteered for this one, buddy. Rennie O'Neal is a very beautiful woman." He proceeded to describe her to Ryan.
"Hmmm, maybe I should offer my services and do a follow up interview with her," Ryan said.
"As usual, you're a day late and a dollar short. I've already asked her out to dinner tonight." It wasn't exactly the truth, but he'd be calling her shortly so it would be true soon enough.
"Aren't you a little concerned she may use her psychic ability to pick up on your deep seeded fear?"
"What deep seeded fear would that be?"
"The fear of commitment, of course," Ryan grinned.
Mac scowled at that. "I don't have commitment issues. I just haven't found a woman I care to spend a lot of time with."
"A lot of time," Ryan repeated with a laugh. "My friend, you haven't found a woman you want to spend more than one night with."
Mac had a feeling Rennie O'Neal would be the exception, but he didn't dare voice that to Ryan. "I'm too busy to worry about a relationship. It's too.exhausting."
Ryan stood up and headed for the door. "You need to stop living and breathing for this job before you find yourself a lonely old man." He stopped at the doorway and looked at Mac. "I hope this O'Neal woman really is psychic. Maybe she can tell you why you're so afraid of making a commitment."
"I'm not afraid of commitments," Mac gritted, but he was talking to thin air. Ryan had already made a hasty retreat. 
He sat at his desk for several minutes, stewing over what Ryan had said. So what if he'd never made an effort to have a real relationship before? It didn't mean he was afraid of having one; he simply didn't want to be bothered with being accountable to someone other than himself. He thought of Rennie and how she'd looked lying in bed, her blue eyes gazing up at him so trustingly. He'd been humbled by it, sensing that trust wasn't something that came easy for her. It had drawn him to her in a way he couldn't explain, and for once he'd actually been interested in knowing a woman, this woman, on something more than a physical level. That wasn't to say he hadn't lain awake half the night visualizing what it would feel like to have Rennie writhing beneath him, but that was secondary to his desire to know more about her. And that, Mac thought, disturbed him a great deal.
He wasn't sure he was ready to jump into a relationship and that's what he'd be doing if he went out with Rennie. She wasn't the type of woman a man spent one night with and then forgot. Hell, he hadn't even kissed her yet and his mind was consumed with thoughts of her. He didn't know anything about her. How would she act when he got called away in the middle of dinner, a movie, making love? Would she pout, get her feelings hurt, be angry? And sometimes, he'd be up all night investigating a crime scene. Would she understand or would she be upset when he had to cancel any plans they'd made? Damn, he really wanted to see her tonight, but there was only one way to put her to the test. Mac picked up the phone and dialed Rennie's number.
***
Rennie answered the phone with a smile on her face. "Good afternoon, Detective Logan, I was just thinking about you."
"How.how did you know it was me?"
"Don't act so spooked," she said with amusement. "I have caller I.D. on my phone."
Mac chuckled. "I guess I walked into that one. Listen, Rennie, I hate to do this to you but it looks like the case I'm working is going to keep me busy for the rest of the day and probably most of the night."
Rennie was disappointed but realized finding someone's murderer was much more important than sharing a meal with a woman he barely knew. "Don't worry about it," she said earnestly. "I'm sure crime doesn't stop just so you can go on a date. Another time maybe?"
Mac was floored. Double damn. Now he'd have to spend the evening alone. He needed an out. "If it wraps up early, would you mind if I gave you a call?"
"I'd like that."
"So how are you holding up after last night?"
"I'm pretty resilient, I'll be fine. How is she, Mac?"
"She's already back home. And what do you mean you'll be fine? Aren't you feeling well?"
"I'm fine, really," she insisted. It was a bold faced lie. She felt like hell and the assault was still fresh on her mind. She'd stood in the shower trying to scrub the feel of that man's hands from her skin for nearly an hour. "I won't keep you from your work any longer. Call me if you get the chance, I'll be home all evening."
After they'd hung up, Rennie went to make another pot of coffee. She'd slept well enough for the first few hours after Mac had gone, but after that she'd been plagued with nightmares. She woke up feeling sluggish and disoriented and had only started to feel human again after taking a shower. She was no longer linked with Angel, but she still felt the young girl's pain. It was hard to let it go. Sometimes after a particularly emotional episode like this one, the blanket of darkness that dominated her lingered for days, even weeks. It was probably just as well that Mac had to bow out on their date, she didn't think she'd have been very good company anyway.
Rennie poured herself a cup of freshly brewed coffee and took it back to her study. She set the cup on the desk then went to the file cabinet, randomly choosing a few files and took them back to the desk. It didn't really matter which file she selected. There were so many and the cases had long since gone cold. She smiled to herself, wondering what Mac would think about what she did for a living. No doubt he'd be pretty shocked to learn that nearly every precinct in the city utilized her services to assist in unsolved homicide cases. Of course, none of them would admit to it. People just weren't ready to accept that their tax dollars were used to pay for a psychic no matter how many cases she'd helped solve.
She opened the first file. Normally she wouldn't risk her health working on a new case so soon after having her strength zapped from such a strong link with the victim, but she needed a distraction and working the files would certainly do the trick. A manila envelope lay inside containing the items she'd need to make a connection; a photograph of the victim, a scrap of material cut from the clothing that was worn at the time of death, and a hair sample. A similar manila envelope rested inside the folder, sealed per her instructions. It contained all the details from the investigation and what evidence was found at the scene, but Rennie rarely opened it. She didn't want any of the information they'd gathered to cloud her own visions of what had happened.
Rennie studied the picture of the elderly lady in the photograph. She felt the slow tingling in her fingers first. Within seconds, she could hear the woman's light, musical laughter as she mixed the cake batter and chatted with her friend. Estelle. That was the woman's name. She'd been a kind woman, giving to others in any way she could. The cake was for a church bazaar and it was only the first of several she intended to make that day. She never got the chance to finish any of them.
Setting the picture aside, Rennie picked up the scrap of material. She placed it in the palm of her hand, closed her fingers around it and watched Estelle's last minutes play out in her mind. The woman's friend was a good many years younger than she was, but they enjoyed each other's company. Estelle thought of her as a daughter. Linda. The last name was more elusive. Del something. Delgrad, no Delgrado, that was it. Linda had chosen to make pies and was cutting apples on a wooden block beside the sink. She had her back to Estelle and was talking about one of the men at church that had asked her out and how excited she was about their date the following week. 
Rennie clutched at her chest and pitched forward as a sharp pain pierced her heart. Estelle opened her mouth and tried to tell Linda that something was terribly wrong, but the only sound that came out was a small gurgling noise that went unheard by her chatty friend. She swayed unsteadily on her feet, splashing batter all over the floor. The pain was intense, blinding, and she dropped the bowl. She took a few steps towards Linda, grateful that the loud clatter of the bowl had drawn the younger woman's attention. The smile on Linda's face faded. What's wrong? Estelle took another step, slipped on the spilled batter, her body lurching forward just as the heart attack she was having squeezed the last breathe from her. Her lifeless body fell heavily into Linda, impaling itself on the butcher knife the younger woman had in her hand.
Estelle was dead. Rennie felt the hollowness deep in her own soul. She never actually experienced the death itself, at least she didn't think so. There was always just this emptiness inside which told her the victim was gone. In this case, however, Estelle hadn't really been a victim at all. Linda had stared in horror at what she'd done and panicked. She'd wiped her fingerprints off the handle of the knife then fled Estelle's house.
Rennie opened her hand and let the material drop onto the desk, drawing in several deep breaths of air to calm herself. She gulped down the rest of the coffee, grimacing at how cold it had grown, then pulled out a pen and paper and began to write. She hoped they could find Linda. The case was over six years old and the poor woman had to be carrying around an enormous amount of guilt. It would be a relief to know she hadn't really killed Estelle. It wasn't until she'd finished jotting everything down that she realized how late it had gotten. In her mind, the scenes that reenacted themselves took only a few minutes to play out, but in reality she often lost as much as four hours before they finally faded and she came back to the real world. She finished her report and rose wearily, intending to call it a night when the phone rang. Her stomach fluttered when a quick glance at the caller I.D. told her it was Mac. 
"I hope it's not too late to call," he said when she answered.
"No, I was just doing a little work and was about to take a break anyway. I hope your evening hasn't been too awful for you."
It had been agonizing actually because he'd spent the hours after getting off work forcing himself not to pick up the phone and call her. He kept thinking about those beautiful blue eyes and how soft her hair had felt when he'd briefly touched it while brushing it off her face. He'd also remembered how intoxicating her scent had been and berated himself for wasting the evening when he could have been enjoying her company.
"It wrapped up much sooner than I'd anticipated," he lied. "I was wondering if you were up to a late dinner. If you've already eaten, maybe we could just go for a cup of coffee and talk for awhile."
"Dinner would be nice. I must warn you though that I haven't had anything since this morning and might embarrass you by eating like a horse."
"I'll take my chances," he said, suddenly feeling the tension leave his body. He hadn't even realized how uptight he'd been about the possibility she'd decline his offer. "I can be there in twenty minutes."
"That will give me just enough time to change clothes and run a brush through my hair. I'll see you soon."
Rennie hung up and was amazed to discover the fatigue had left her. She felt energized just thinking about being with Mac and all but ran up the stairs to find something nice to wear. She chose a dark blue summer dress because she always felt good in it, more confident. It conformed to her figure, falling just above the knee and the matching belt emphasized how small her waistline was. She applied some mascara, which was the only make-up she ever wore then brushed her teeth and hair and went downstairs to wait for Mac. A few minutes later, the butterflies in her stomach took flight once more when she heard him pull up in the driveway.
Squelch
14 January 2009
That's fantastic! Thanks for posting it :)
Jessie122
25 January 2009
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg!

I abosolutely LOVED this piece and chapter 2!!! thankyou sooooo much for posting this!!!

oh, can you please check out my "help please" thing, i would love your advice!

Thanks,
   Jessie122 :)
unbridledspirit
25 January 2009
Wow...what a wonderful piece of work.  I certainly hope that you will have this published.  You captured my attention from the very beginning.  I loved how you described everything.  It was like I was there.  Amazing work!  Thank you for sharing your passion of writing.
kreeves106
27 January 2009
Thank you so much to everyone that has left comments and voted for me.  It means a lot to know someone besides myself enjoys my story!  The best of luck in your own writing...

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