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Brevity and conciseness, something I strive for. I like it very much.
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Me too - I like the sentiments of mortality :0)
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hi, thanks for all the comments. i appreciate each of them. will post some new work soon. :)
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Yes! "Time falls through our fingers like a river of ink." That was an eye-catching line! "Our pen is starting to dry, the clock prepares us to say our goodbyes." That was a heart-catching line!
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