TEAR CRY...xxx by blackrose

My head 
is between my knees
and a tear rolls 
down my thigh.
I hold my breath
(trying not to make a sound)
so that I can hear 
the tear cry as it hits the ground.
I hear it sigh
and wonder why?
Because no-one told the tear
why it had to leave the eye.

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Comments

Carl

31 August 2008

Like your other poem, I really like this one too. It's a bit more 'technical' though. I actually prefer it when you're more sardonic! Another please!

JD Higginson

23 April 2009

Amazing imagery in this poem. Really gripped me. Made me feel quite sorrowful for the subject. Well done.

JD

taylorswift97

08 January 2010

This is a very emotional piece, and that is one of the top qualities (in my opinion) that an article must possess. Excellent work.

taylorswift97

08 January 2010

You know what I mean? Strong emotions, put into words, really grip the reader.

blackrose

13 January 2010

thank you for your comments.....i've been writing so many essays and reports at the moment  uni has taken over my life!!!!


............its comforting to be inspired again.
x

Also see: An Angel's Heart (Fredaa) • Wizard Of Old (Zaldorin) • Butterflies poem (Lovepink) • Damned Fool...xxx (blackrose) • From a Cat to a Bat (essexian) • VODKA, BEER, Or GOD (royalndnprincess) • GROW FINGERS. (Durlabh Singh) • The age of electricity (Carl) • Holding Hands (Zodiac) • Petal in flames (Carl)

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Writer blackrose	Total posts: 56
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Well what can I say....I love to write, I write poetry mainly but I have recently started to write a novel, which coming along slowly but surely!!!! (thanks to MyNovel Software!!!...) I am new to this ... (Read more)

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