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About Me (Don9307)

By Don9307 | Posted: 18 January 2009

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My given name is Donald, Don for short, but my mother always called me "Donnie" from the first day I heard her call me to supper, scold me for doing something that I shouldn't, or praise me for doing something that pleased her. Even after my adolescent days were behind me, my mother would still call me "Donnie." In contrast, my second grade teacher, Mrs. Whitson--may God rest her soul--would always refer to me by my full first name; and, in due time, I was nevertheless happy to hear someone, anyone, call me "Donnie."

You should know right from the outset that I'm a consummate perfectionist, and can even be characterized as a bit obsessive, perhaps even compulsive. Regarding the latter, when I was a child, I can recall going to the grocery store with my mom or grandma and walking endlessly up and down the cereal isle, tapping each individual box of cereal with my index finger. I wouldn't count them, heavens no. That's not what obsessive-compulsive people do, you see. Instead, my goal was to touch each box in turn, but touch them only once mind you, while making certain I hadn't neglected any. But, if any boxes remained unattended, I would have to start the ritual all over again, from the beginning, touching each box until I was sure I had completed the ritual, flawlessly. Now, as regards the former, nothing I can write here would ever do justice in describing as to what manner of obsessive perfectionism I am so possessed. As most perfectionists will tell you, we are never fully satisfied with a task, a project, or whatever it is we may be engaged in doing at the moment. As a member of their lot, I find myself constantly reviewing what I write, to ferret out even the slightest imperfection so that anything which does not meet my highest expectation does not escape my scrutiny. Moreover, as a perfectionist, I ascribe to the philosophy: If you want to get it done correctly, you must do it yourself. So, being a perfectionist does have its up-side: you get your work done accurately and effectively. However, being a perfectionist also has its down-side: it takes you a lot longer to get something done, which is often not the most efficient way to go about any task. That being said, I'm so glad to make your acquaintance.

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Comments 
shamus
18 January 2009
I have critiqued your work as follows -

[First impressions]
I found your work interesting and believable
I found your work to have an easy, rolling rhythm that moved the story forward
not my usual genre but a very interesting peice of work.  It made me wonder whether or not its your usual self or just made up. I feel that way sometimes as if compelled to do things with immaculate order- but thankfully only at times.  As to writing- i think all serious writers are the same- forever going back over their work looking for improvements, which at times can make things worse.  Have you ever kept altering paragraphs over a period and then much later gone back to the original piece of writing and found it to be much better.  An very old lady still alive and kicking- and a great writer, once told me that your original thoughts are nearly always the best.  \best of luck  Shamus
[Beginning]
I found the beginning compelling
yes it did.  I carried on reading out of interest.
Mr Richard
23 January 2009
Well done Donnie. I  Like the way your words flow.

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