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Deep Inside

By mature gent | Posted: 19 January 2009

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Deep inside their is a voice 
That sometimes seems to warn me

Deep inside their is a feeling
glowing warm and bright

Deep inside I have my lord
who guides and protects me
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Comments 
unbridledspirit
19 January 2009
This to me appears to be a good start to a pretty good poem. However, for me, it is too short because I am left wanting to know more about the emotions tied to your experience in knowing God.
debbie reynolds
23 January 2009
Simply to the point, yes there is something deep inside us waiting to get out!
Serena
04 February 2009
I am always genuinely pleased when I read of other peoples faith (even if it makes me feel as if my beliefs are heathen!) as I really enjoy the peace that I read in these lines.

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