RankMost active authors
1
Jan Phillips (35)
2
louis kasatkin (93)
3
Eddie Larkin (95)
4
computer101 (31)
5
brian dunn (186)
6
Truthwielder (58)
7
RedeemedAshes (21)
8
evakaye (272)
9
The Unforgiving Minute (18)
10
Adrian (18)
11
angeliki largatzis (11)
12
troy universe (17)
13
Wombat (47)
14
CaseyPowers (20)
15
Doggerel Banksy (6)
16
notebook (157)
17
bobthebuilder (6)
18
Rai Pager (21)
19
jimbob (31)
20
bowenlizzie (4)
21
wolfeyesofgoldenrays (199)
22
will2power (38)
23
churchmouse (435)
24
Aurora (10)
25
navlohoe (38)

Dolphin

By kneazle | Posted: 01 February 2009

Views: 185
Breaks the surface
A shooting star
Lithe bodies flex
Sending spray a far.

See the water dancers
With the intelligent eyes
Caressing the water
The fastest pod flies.

In highest spirit
Sing a noisy call
Playing together
Into water they fall.
All articles on this website by kneazle are copyright ©kneazle and should not be reproduced without the author's prior written consent. All opinions are the opinions of their respective authors and are not necessarily the opinions of The Writers' Circle.
Comments 
unbridledspirit
01 February 2009
I could imagine the dolphins as I read.  Good job!

Writer
kneazle

Total posts:
46
Roles: Writer
Birmingham, UNITED KINGDOM
I am fourteen, I've written two novels (nanowrimo anyone?) and many poems. Aiming to be published at some point in the vague and hazy future...but till then pfft. I'll keep writing for the hell of it.
Recent submissions 
Critique
Genre / category: Welcome
C
Ringtone
Genre / category: Fiction
Coming Back
Genre / category: Welcome
C
Bessie The Little Werewolf
Genre / category: Fiction
E
C
Bonfire
Genre / category: Poetry
Nanowrimo
Genre / category: Welcome
C
To Me
Warning: (Violence)
Genre / category: Poetry
C
Second Best
Genre / category: Poetry
C
When we fight
Warning: (Violence)
Genre / category: Fiction
Editing Advice
Genre / category: Welcome
12