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When winter draws its august breath to blow; When it charges clouds with crystals and decks trees and bushes with icy bristles; When it sheets every little brittle leaf with frozen pearls that glisten - Hearts such as ours are at their balmiest And our ears are readiest to listen. Winter is an orchestra with icicles for flutes and sheets of sleet for crotchets; When winter draws its flautist breath, it is only to render fluid music in the form of snow; As it breathes in, closing its eyes to concentrate and listen, We close our own eyes, breathe in, And concentrate and listen too. (January 2006)
WOW...I LOVE this, it's like a picture is being painted slowly in my mind has I read it!!! the use of metaphor is brilliant. xxx
Simply beautiful. I could read this over and over again and never get bored.