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Listen

By Carl | Posted: 31 August 2008

Views: 408

When winter draws its august breath
to blow;

When it charges clouds with crystals
and decks trees and bushes
with icy bristles;

When it sheets every little brittle leaf
with frozen pearls
that glisten -

Hearts such as ours
are at their balmiest

And our ears
are readiest to listen.

Winter is an orchestra
with icicles for flutes
and sheets of sleet for crotchets;

When winter draws its flautist breath,
it is only to render fluid music
in the form of snow;

As it breathes in,
closing its eyes
to concentrate and listen,

We close our own eyes,
breathe in,

And concentrate
and listen too.

(January 2006)

All articles on this website by Carl are copyright ©Carl and should not be reproduced without the author's prior written consent. All opinions are the opinions of their respective authors and are not necessarily the opinions of The Writers' Circle.
Comments 
blackrose
05 September 2008
WOW...I LOVE this,
it's like a picture is being painted slowly in my mind has I read it!!!
the use of metaphor is brilliant.

xxx
ChrissieJo
27 February 2009
Simply beautiful. I could read this over and over again and never get bored.

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