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Well done, this won the March 2009 Writers Circle competition!
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Hi chloerose08,
This has a lovely flowing speed to it and each line seems to make sense although the poem itself does not paint a vivid story/picture in my mind and for me wasn't punchy enough.
This is purely personal opinion and there is nothing wrong with it but for me it did not conjure any images.
But please keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more.
Regards
Gary
PS: Well done for winning the contest.
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