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A blossom tree emerged once pink but now rose red Standing on battlefields now torn and dead And what do the civilians think of the October Revolution? Trapped inside by their brainwashed red delusions Certainly not of what the rich leaders think Dressed on furs of white wolf and mink Equality was lost from start The once mighty Russia was torn apart And for what purpose do they bring? A country without their king Those whose thoughts were against Their presence was soon to be never sensed They, those communist ruthless red leaders Not a glance or word or even heed us The loving fathers or soon to be Taken and disposed by N.K.V.D And what do the civilians think of the communist regime Tortured and killed by their leaders cunning scheme
Loved the first four lines but it seemed to peter out after that. The flow broke up a bit and I didn't get as much sense of ease as with the beginning. Could be very good with a bit of work, though. Good job. JD