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Maybe...?

By blackrose | Posted: 01 September 2008

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Maybe She screams at me,
'cos she can see where I am heading.
Maybe She is mean to me,
'cos She has been there before.
Maybe it frustrates Her to see me
not being the best of all I can be.
So now
She can only see
the potential worst of me,
'cos She's the only one 
who has felt the...depths of me!
Maybe She is dismissive,
because she doesn't want to become,
too deeply infatuated with my potential.
Or 
Maybe she just used I,
and dismissed the Me 
She couldn't be bothered to deal with.
'Cos maybe,
She knows that...
...She Hurt Me.
Maybe She doen't want to 
violate myself,
You know,
like keep giving to somebody else!
Dragging the 
purity out myself.
We loved too hard!
Slowly the hunger turned.
I starved.
But She Fed and Full,
keeps nip-picking at my heart.
Not knowing she had it from the very start!...
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Comments 
Carl
04 September 2008
Another great poem! Reminds me a bit of the style of Stevie Smith - I don't know why.
Jessie122
02 January 2009
A really good poem! Keep up the good work!

Thanks,
   Jessie122 :)
JD Higginson
23 April 2009
Really, really good. Loved it. Very emotional.

JD

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