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I'm a fan, blackrose! A deep, clever poem..
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Well-written.
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FIRST THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MY INTRODUCTION VERSES COINSOF MAN AND FALCE POWERS. THIS POEM IN THE MIND IS FULL OF DEPTH AND FLOWS WITH AN EMOTIONAL TOUCH GREAT READING.
MATURE MAN
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Deep thoughts, deep meaning, intense feeling,brill.
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You've really captured the truth in this, that it really is a state of mind and that we are able to change things, starting first with our way of thinking. I'd also like to thank you for the positive comment you left towards 'poet's monologue', I appreciate it very much. :)
Merry Christmas xxx
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Two Words. LOVE IT !
Ruby
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Loved the poem. Only one minor point though: 'your' should be 'you're' on lines 9 and 14. Great work though. Well done.
JD
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