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It's in the Mind...x

By blackrose | Posted: 01 September 2008

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It's in the mind
every single individual kind.
So when going in search for that
inner state.
Remember.
There is no physical map
to guide you to your inner gate.
And nothing falls from the sky!
So while your
wasting your time,
Remember.
It's in the mind,
every single individual kind,
and while your 
unaware of yours,
beware of those who have 
their ear to floor.
Because you would never believe,
that it would be the closest,
by whom you'd be decieved!
and when the truth has bee recieved,
the internal grief will be soothed,
by the knowledge
that protective layer
that it is all in the mind,
every single individual kind of
...Divine Order!
see, the mind has
unexplanable ways
of recording all the events
that have brought us to this day.
This mornng.
Even when we feel like we are falling,
we must be thankful, even in despair.
How would we pull ourselves out
if we had never been there?!
Are You Stuck?
It's in the mind
every single individual kind.
Calming the intense state
that time plays... on the feelings,
leaving us with distorted meaning.
But everything deep-rooted 
will have greater meaning.
And,
with time
in every single individual kind
We will find
Peace of mind.
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Comments 
Carl
04 September 2008
I'm a fan, blackrose! A deep, clever poem..
CommittedVision
06 September 2008
Well-written.
mature gent
14 November 2008
FIRST THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MY INTRODUCTION VERSES COINSOF MAN AND FALCE POWERS. THIS POEM IN THE MIND IS FULL OF DEPTH AND FLOWS WITH AN EMOTIONAL TOUCH GREAT READING.
MATURE MAN
debbie reynolds
14 November 2008
Deep thoughts, deep meaning,  intense feeling,brill.
Aldice
25 December 2008
You've really captured the truth in this, that it really is a state of mind and that we are able to change things, starting first with our way of thinking. I'd also like to thank you for the positive comment you left towards 'poet's monologue', I appreciate it very much. :)
Merry Christmas xxx
rubyblaze
26 December 2008
Two Words.   LOVE IT !

Ruby
JD Higginson
23 April 2009
Loved the poem. Only one minor point though: 'your' should be 'you're' on lines 9 and 14. Great work though. Well done.

JD

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