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I'm letting it go

By chloerose08 | Posted: 11 April 2009

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The more I hurt you, the more I hurt myself.
How can that be just? 
You cut me, it's your doing, so why,
am I suffering like this? 
Frantic writing to stop myself from crying,
let it go, let it go, let it go.
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JD Higginson
25 April 2009
 
Good, short piece full of emotion.

Good job.

JD

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